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Friday, June 23, 2017

The girl in the red coat


One dark, rainy day in this poor town lived a little girl named Laura, Laura was only 5 years old. She loved her town the only thing is some people got so sick they had to stay outside. The town has been around for fifty years, or more. Laura said “ can we got to the shops, please Mum and Dad, please.” Inside I had butterflies in my stomach my head was shaking because Mum and Dad might say “ No.” I waited there for a few seconds and Dad said “ Yes.” I was bouncing out of control because Dad actually said “ Yes.”

Laura’s Mum and Dad let Laura go to the shops, Laura couldn’t believe it she was bouncing more out of control and giving her Mum and Dad a hug then she went to the shops. This was Laura’s first time going to the shops by herself. After a few minutes Laura couldn’t find her way out she crying so much that her tears looked like wet wet rain drops.
She thought “ I should stop being a baby and find my way home, ” Laura was so pumped to find her Mum that she will literally stay in other people’s houses if she has to. She started to hike to her house she got poked by a pokey plant, she was so sor but she didn’t give up till she ended her search. She was making progress and she found one of her family’s house it was her Nana “ Hi Nana, how are you Nana ” Her Nana asked
“ What are you doing far from home Laura. ” Laura explained everything to her Nana and she helped Laura continue her search after Laura and her Nana have a sleep.

Today Laura will journey all the way to her Mum and Dad and reunite with them and my Nana will help me to get there. We climbed the mountain walked through the grass and finally made it back home. Laura said “ Mum, Dad I’m here, I’m here. ” Mum and Dad said
“ We were looking for you everywhere, but your home now that’s the more important thing and, oh hey Laura’s Nana. ” Laura’s Nana said
“ Hey haven’t seen you in ages but were together now and if Laura didn’t come to my house she wouldn’t of be able to come back home to you guys. Laura doesn't want to go to the shops alone ever again.

The end.


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