My worst drink day ever (first draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

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• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First draft

My worst drink day ever

It was another beautiful day at the  African Savannah. It was early March Today we start migrating. My dad was the lead bull. It was so hot and we needed a rain cloud just once.  We found water and some bulls and I went to the water.

The bulls found the lions and we were running from the lions. Then I fell in the river bank then a crocodile played tug u war with the lions  and they were pulling me. When I finally got out my family helped me up and we ran away for good. We didn't get a drink at all.

My dad roared to start my herds migration.  We were sightseeing while we were migrating we smelled the morning air. We saw the pride of lions asleep in the sun and I hoped that they will not get my family or herd. Oh no the lions are getting ready to pounce it looks like they are going to get me.Oh no I can smell the pride of lions are coming run guys the pride of lions are going to eat me. I was super scared because I am only 2 years old. Then I fell in the water I tasted the river water hoping not to drown thank goodness because I was still alive but a crocodile showed up and played tug a war with the pride of lions were pulling me. It really hurt. Then I heard my herd came and rescue me and got the lions to never do that again. My herd helped me on my feet.

So I finally got out of the tug a war and I felt better then we finish our migrating we were still sightseeing. I was so relieved that I survived the tug a war. The lions ran away for good and I have no idea what happened with the crocodile. Hopefully he would not come back to get me.