Painting the town reading DLO

Painting the town

W.A.LT: I am learning to make decisions about what I read.

This is a DLO I made a few weeks ago and I forgot to post it, so I'm posting it now. Basically it is a DLO about Christchurch city and its art. This is just some facts about it and what they use.

Here it is:

I hope you like my DLO, bye.

Star safe or unsafe

W.A.L.T: look at our options and make the safest decision.

This is my safe or unsafe star slide, basically it is
Stop
Think
Act
Report
Those are the star action we needed to think about with a situation that is on my slide.




This is my slide I really hope you like it and learn from it. Bye

Selfie cat writing

WALT use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting and what is happening.

Selfie cat is just a piece of writing I did this week and a little of last week. It's basically about a girl wanting to be first and she became second and she needed . We could choose be the cat or the girl, I was the girl

Here it is:

I hope you like my writing, bye.

My Acrostic / friends poem

This is my Acrostic poem, similar to my name poem but it's just about something else. It has stuff my friends are like your friends might be different.

Here it is:
F is for Friendly, funny and kind

R is for Really funny, makes you laugh a lot
I is for interesting, when we're not normal

E is for energetic, when we feel like it

N is for Nike, what we all like

D is for Drawing, we draw at different times and we love it

S is for Silly, all of us

I hope you like my Acrostic poem, bye.

My name poem

Hi guys today I'm gonna show you my name poem. A name poem is just a poem but spell the letters of your name or anything else like that.

Here's my one:

D is for Different, weird sometimes

A is for Annoying, sometimes I am

N is for Naughty, at home

I is for Inactive, don’t like sports that much

E is for easy going, chillin

L is for Laughing, people make me laugh

L is for Learning, going to high school

E is for Excitement, get excited easy

Danielle weird but funny

I hope you like my name poem, bye

Haiku poem

This is just a Haiku poem I made, a Haiku poem is just a poem that has five syllables on the first line, seven syllables on the second line and finally the last line is five syllables.

Here it is:

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Second cinquain poem

Hey guys I'm posting my second cinquain poem to show you guys and it is pretty funny just to warn you guys. A callable cinquain poem is when you say the word you say Sponge-bob or A-dor-a-ble like that.

Here it is:




Pretty funny right, yeah I know it is. I hope you guys like this poem better than my other one, because I know I do. Anyways I hope you laugh like I did, bye.

My cinquain poem slide

Hi guys I'm back with another post to show you guys. This one is my acquaint poem I made today.

Here it is:



I hope you like my slide. Bye.

All about me

W.A.L.T: Know more about each other.

This is just an all about me that I just wanted you guys to see.

Here it is:

I hope you guys like it, bye.

My summing recount

W.A.L.T: write a good recount and look at the structure of a recount.

Here's my recount about swimming:

Swimming

On Wednesday the 25th of October 2017 in the afternoon, room 10 and 6 went swimming at the Canterbury swim school. I’m in room 10 so I went with room 6. First we got changed and you don’t want to know here about that so let’s go on. Then my class eated there morning tea and I had most of my lunch, so I won’t have much for lunch today.

Then when the first bell rang we went to play. I went to the other side of the school but then I remembered when the next bell rang I needed to get my swim bag and line up, so I just went back. The bell rang and I went back.

Then we went to meet up with room six on the way to bus get on the bus. We went out of the school gates and waited for about five minutes till we got on the bus.

When we got on the bus we all found a seat and I was facing right towards my bestfriends.

We got off the bus to go in and take our shoes off and get into our togs. We were all finished getting undressed into our togs and we walked into the actual thing were the pools were. I was in the big cold pool, but there are smaller warmer pools that I was in last year.

Anyways we all got our caps and goggles on and went to our groups. When I got in the pool it was cold but after swimming a little bit it got warmer. The first thing we did was as much as we can of freestyle. Then we did the same but backstroke, did the same for the worm as well. But only freestyle we had to do at least 8 lengths

After we finished our lesson the girl went in the girl changing room and the boys went in the boys changing rooms. When I got in the changing rooms I was getting dressed and talking at the same time.

After we got changed we put our shoes on and sat in our lines to go back on the bus, to go to school.

When we got back to school it was play time then we carried on with a normal school day.

I like swimming very much at the swim school.

Facts about the sun

W.A.L.T:  I am learning to read and find the appropriate information I am looking for

This is my DLO about facts about the sun / or how the sun helps us.

Here's my DLO:




Hope you enjoy, bye

My Kakapo poster

W.A.L.T: Predicting

I am learning to make and check predictions  (smart guesses) before, during and after reading.

Summarising

I am learning to summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words.

Evaluating

I am learning to think carefully about what I am reading and how I use the text.

This is my reading poster, we had to finish this by the day I’m posting this. But I finished it a day before I was meant to. Basically this is just heaps of facts to teach people about the Kakapo.

My Lily and the snowman writing

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of the snowman

WALT use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting, the snowman's feelings and thoughts and what is happening.

This is just my writing for this week, if you didn’t read my W.A.L.T I’m basically learning to describe and my teacher calls it show not tell. Show not tell means like just paint a picture in the reader's head

This is my writing:

Lily and the snowman

One glowey winter night the moon was shining like sun on a window in the summer. I really love to make snowmen in the winter in my giant backyard. I love to feel the snow on my hands and feet, I also love see how deep the snow is and fall in sometimes. I haven’t told anyone but I want to eat the snow. I love the snow so much I asked my mum “ can I go out to play in the snow for 20 minutes” from my warm cozy bed and mum said “yes, but you need to come in when I tell you and bundle up” from the warm fire place. I said “ok, I will.” I got ready and went outside.

Oh hi my name is Lily and I’m 6 years old I went outside and the snow was better than I imagined. It looked like candy floss and I just want to eat it right now, but I know I can’t. After three minutes I started to make snowballs and I had an idea. I should make a snowman so that’s what I did. I got all the materials, a carrot, a scarf, stones for button and face, the last thing is a hat.

I started to make the snowballs bigger and bigger till I made two pretty big snowballs, I added all the materials except the carrot. So I added the carrot and I jumped down, then something magical happened the snowman came to life. I was so shocked and excited I had my own snowman, he said “ hi I’m your magical snowman.” In my head I was screaming but all I said  was “ this is awesome I have my own talking snowman. The snowman said “just call me bill.” So I said “ok hi bill.”

I said “ what can you do bill,” he didn’t say anything he showed me what he could do. He put on a puppet show and I love puppet shows nearly as much as I love the snow. I was so thrilled. Bill said “ use your imagination and that’s what I did. The first one was a bird, I imagined it flying over big rocks and a knight riding a horse. The horse was jumping rock to rock and it was really cool. I loved it so much I screamed with happiness.

A few days later he did another one and it was an umbrella, I imagined it that my dad was on and island and my mum found him. Then hugged him under the moonlight, that one was really cool as well. But then spring was starting to come and bill was melting, but I had an idea of putting him in the garage freezer. I asked him if that would be ok and he said “ that’s the best idea I’ve heard ever.” I told him I would get him out every winter and play with him.  The last thing bill asked was “ can I have a teddy bear” so I gave him a teddy bear.

A year later it was snowing again and I could bill out and play with him. He didn’t look different at all but he said “ Lily you got taller and you look more michore. I said “ thank you bill, are you ready to have some fun. He said “ of course I’m ready” so we went to the backyard and we watched the show together again and again. Until spring came and he had to go back in the freezer. We were both really sad but we knew we needed to put bill in the freezer until next winter.

But next winter I was a teenager and I forgot about Bill, but I did got say hi and stuff. But I was on my phone most of the time and I didn’t ask him how his day was or anything, that was rude of me. Inside I did want to take Bill out but I was just too busy with my friends and doing teenager stuff. One time I was grabbing an ice block out of the freezer and he looked really sad, but once again I was on my phone talking to my friends.

Years have past and now I’m an adult, I work and I have a child, but I still live in the same house. I had to stay late for work because that day I was about ten minutes late to work. When I was leaving everything went wrong, my cup fall over, my light fall over and my snow globe moved on my desk. It showed a picture of a snowman… Bill I just remembered he’s in the freezer in the garage, I keep forgetting to take him out every winter. I need to go home and get him out of the freezer. So I rushed home and went to the garage and got everything away from the freezer, then opened it.

Bill looked so thrilled and I said “ I’m sorry for forgetting to take you out, I don’t know what I was thinking” he said, “ I forgive you Lilly you were just growing up.” I was so glad bill understood me and I asked him. “Do you want to put on a show for my daughter.” He said “ of course I am.” So I told my daughter and she was so thrilled she got ready right away.

This was so memorable my daughter could keep Bill then give it to her children, the whole family can have a go at keeping Bill. But for now Bill is mine and I can ask Bill to put on a show for my kids and my family. Because my kids love puppet shows as well, and I still loves Bill’s shows and I will take him out every winter. This time I will never miss a winter ever again.

The end.

20 things we should say more often

This is just 20 things I think people should say more often and if you don't wanna say these things you don't have to.

This is the video link:My video

This is the original video:Original video

I hope you like my video and learn new things I think you should say more, bye.

Extravaganza reflection

1. Making the props
   When I first heard we were making the props I thought it would be challenging but me and my group still did it. I was sick when they picked the groups so I was a little surprised by my group because I was the only girl in my group, but we all worked together and got the work done.
   2. During the progress
   During the progress we were getting more done and our group got split to get more props done. When my half of the group was finished all our props we helped my bffs group, and I wasn’t the only girl in my group any more.
   3. At the performance on Wednesday
   I was pretty nervous for the performance on Wednesday but I didn’t have to be nervous anymore because my head was starting to hurt. Because I coughed so much and I didn’t have my inhaler at school before the performance or at the performance.
   Last. Sick on Thursday
   I was so sad I had to miss the performance but I knew I had to stay at my aunt's house well my mum was at the performance and get better.

After the performance our teacher said to write a little about the performance  and how we felt, bye

Terryfieng house

One outstanding sunny day, the blue was bold in the sky and the clouds looked like pillows and candy floss. My house had bright red bricks, but the colour was draining out because of the rain in the winter, but at least it’s spring now. We get to play outside more and go on our trampoline more as well. Our yard and trampoline is starting to get dry. It was around the time people had playdates. Iut I don’t think I will have a play date because my friends might be busy, or they might have playdates with their other friends.

Hi my name is Laura and I’m a 5 year old little girl. My mums name is Jacky and my dad's name is Matt. Today my mum told we I was having a playdate with my bestie Kendall and her brother Jack. Jack has only told me that he kinda has a crush on me, also I love playing with Kendall. Kendall is so amazing she has toys, little kids makeup and so much fun other stuff. I was so excited I started to jumping all around my room and saying “I’m gonna see Kendall and Jack, I’m gonna see Kendall and Jack.” I was so excited when I heard about going to Kendall’s house I got ready super fast so I had time to get some activities that both of us can do. If Jack wants to join in because I’m there I got him some boy stuff to play with to. After I got everything in my bag my mum said “Laura Kendall’s mum is waiting for you, also Kendall and Jack are in the car.”  I knew Jack will be in the car but I was so excited Kendall was in the car.

I went out to the car and Jack finally told Kendall he has a crush on me. He made me sit in the middle so Jack and Kendall can both sit by me. On the way to Kendall’s house I talked to Kendall the most, Jack also tried to make me fall in love with him but I ignored him because I don’t like him that much. I just talked to Kendall. I got to Kendall’s house and I heard Jack say “I have a crush on Laura” to his mum.  I didn’t hear the rest thought, did he want to make me to fall in love with him from his mum or did he want to make his mum tell Kendall to make me fall in love with him. My heart was pounding more than normal and my hands were shaking I went to Kendall and said “I’m starting to think Jack is crazy in love with me.” Kendall said “Maybe he is but I’d just stay away from him if i was you. let’s just play and I can help you calm down Laura.” I thought Kendall was right and we just kept on playing.

After we played with the dolls I brought Kendall said “ I dare you to go up in the Attic” in my head I thought why but I did it anyways for my bestfriend. I barely heard anything up in the attic but I still went up. When I took my first step I was shaking so much my hands were in I ball. I was so scared I just felt like going back to Kendall but I had to go up and face one of my fears, Attic’s. I took more and more steps and nothing scary happened “phew” I said. But then a buggy came out of it’s cage, My heart went faster and faster I wanted to run out but if I hurt myself I would go home. So I just screamed “Kendall, Jack anyone help!” Jack heard me and ran right up, did I forget to mention birds are my biggest nightmare. Jack came up and made me go behind him and he put the buggy back in the cage. I said “ thanks Jack you're not so annoying after all” Jack whispered “ she might be in love with me now.” I only heard love but he was happy so I didn’t hurt his feelings by saying anything.

I went back to Kendall and she asked “ Why were you up there so long, and why were you up there Jack.” Jack and I said “ It’s a long story” and we both laughed. After that Jack asked if you bring stuff for me I wasn’t surprised he asked me but I said yes because I don’t want to lie to the person how put my biggest fear back in the cage. Jack said “ you're the funnest person, and the cutest person I ever met.” I knew he was gonna say cutest but I said nothing and got Jack’s toys out of my bag and we played .

It came the saddest time of today I needed to go home, Jack, Kendall and I were all sad. In my head I thought Jack is kinda cute but I won’t tell him now because I’m going home and I don’t want to hurt his feelings. I gave Jack a hi five and Kendall a hug and said “bye I really want another play date with you guys, ” Jack and Kendall feel the same way.

I was talking to mum and said “ when can I have another play date with Jack and Kendall.” I thought my mum said I don’t know but she actually said “Maybe in a few weeks.” In my head I wanted another one this week.

My fraction DLO for week 4

Hey guys this is another fraction slide slow to help you with a problem and help you to work it out.

The slide:




I hope you learnt more about fractions today, bye

My DLO about the Maori in the 1800s

This is a slide about the Maori in the 1800s and what they did and what they wore back in that time.

here's the slide:

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My fraction DLO

This is a slide to help you understand fractions a little more and give you some information on fractions.

Here's the slide:

ADA DLO for scince

This is our ADA DLO ADA stands for Anneleise, Danielle and Alexis.

We are making fluffy slime next term

Ormie writing

On this sunny Saturday morning Ormie finally turned 5 years old and he got adopted for the first time ever. Ormie was just looking around the house to see what it was like, then… He smelt the, cookies the smell lifted him off his feet to the top of the fridge, then BONK Ormie went back down. Ormie had heard a lot about cookies and he loves the smell of them to. Ormie was so desperate for one cookie, he started to think of ideas. One popped in his mind, cookies get ready for Ormie.

Quickly Ormie thought of an idea he could use a broom to tickle the cookies down, that didn’t work. Ormie thought “I can use a stall.” Ormie got a stall, ran up and, BASH. Ormie went strait and hit the wall. Ormie had a super quick idea he could try and climb up brilliant. He got up to the freezer opened and ice fall down on his head, none of Ormie’s plans were working.

Ormie had another quick idea he could use books and an ironing board to make a sea sour. He graved a heavy shiny green ball and put it on the other side of the sea sour. He had his legs out and put the ball on, Ormie said “That was a bad idea.” Ormie will just have to keep trying

“Wait” Ormie said, he can make stairs with boxes, so he graved all the boxes he could find and stacked them up one by one. He started to walk happily up the box stairs, he got to the top. Ormie was about to get a cookie then… The boxes all broke and Ormie BONKED on the floor again. Keep trying Ormie you can do it“Huh a trampoline” Ormie thought it could bounce him up and he can Grab the cookies, awesome plan Ormie. Ormie got the trampoline and placed it just right so if he can jump high enough he could grab the cookies. He jumped with all his strength and he just needs to go a bit higher. Noo Ormie broke the trampoline. He’s starting to get pretty depressed.

He was so determined to get the cookies he thought If he couldn’t stick to the fridge he could use plunger to stick him to it. That’s exactly what Ormie did, he got 2 plungers and climbed up the top of the fridge. But when Ormie got his 2 plungers on the fridge and freezer the doors kept opening. Ormie opened and closed the doors really fast, then both his plungers came straight of the fridge. Ormie has the plungers over his body he tries to get them off but they just keep going to a different place.

Then Ormie had an idea of getting the noisiest sharpest chainsaw and cutting his way to get the cookies. So that’s what Ormie did he got the sharpest and loudest chainsaw he ever saw and got ready to cut. Ormie sprinted up to the fridge and cut a hole around the fridge and the cookies fall out of the jar. Ormie arm was just too short he couldn’t get the cookies. Ormie was starting to get kinda tired.

He had heaps of ideas, hanging of a helicopter, riding a bike up a ramp, sling shooting himself to the cookie and all those silly ideas. He was so desperate for the cookies he would do anything. “Wait” Ormie said, he could use a plane and drop on the fridge perfect idea Ormie. Ormie rang a plane guy and asked if he could use a plane. The plane guy said “yes.”

The plane guy dropped the plane off so Ormie can use it, Ormie read the instructions and then he started to practice flying. He finally got it and he brought it in the kitchen, and got ready to jump off. Ormie jumped off the plane and he thought he would land to the fridge, but he didn’t. Ormie was starting to get really angry.

Ormie was giving up and he banged into the side of the freezer, it was a miracle the cookies fall down. He grabbed a cookie that fall in his hand

“Huh a trampoline” Ormie thought it could bounce him up and he can Grab the cookies, awesome plan Ormie. Ormie got the trampoline and placed it just right so if he can jump high enough he could grab the cookies. He

Measurements DLO

This is how to do a scale in measurements with metiers and centimeters.

Hope you learn stuff about measurements from this slide. Bye.

The haunted shop

The haunted shop story

This is how I became a doll forever… One stormy cold winter I was skipping across the street of a haunted village. Hi my name is Alma and I’m 6 years old, when you're 6 years old you get to go to the haunted village and write your name on the old green wall. I don’t believe it’s haunted but my parents said it is. I went to the village, wrote my name up and nothing spooky happened until…

I saw an amazing wonderful doll inside that old rusty shop. I think it looks like me but I’m not 100% sure. So I had a look at myself and it looked the same “ I wish I could go in that shop to get that doll.” I yanked the door handle and it still didn’t open I was so filled with anger, I threw a snowball at the door. Wait the door creaked open does that mean I can go in the shop.

I tiptoed into the shop and I saw more than 56 dolls but some of them were moving? That’s a bit weird but I was so desperate for the doll that looks like me. A doll banded into my foot that doll was riding a bike, that’s weirder than before.

How did the doll move who cares I just want that doll to show Mum and Dad. Then I couldn’t find it, I was looking around and around till I found it. It some how made it up to the shelf. I stretched my arm up and up “ I got it, woah, where am I “ I wondered. Wait I’m in the doll, how did this happen, who did this. I guess I should've listened to my parents. I guess this town is really haunted after all. That’s how I became a living doll forever.

The end

The girl in the red coat

One dark, rainy day in this poor town lived a little girl named Laura, Laura was only 5 years old. She loved her town the only thing is some people got so sick they had to stay outside. The town has been around for fifty years, or more. Laura said “ can we got to the shops, please Mum and Dad, please.” Inside I had butterflies in my stomach my head was shaking because Mum and Dad might say “ No.” I waited there for a few seconds and Dad said “ Yes.” I was bouncing out of control because Dad actually said “ Yes.”

Laura’s Mum and Dad let Laura go to the shops, Laura couldn’t believe it she was bouncing more out of control and giving her Mum and Dad a hug then she went to the shops. This was Laura’s first time going to the shops by herself. After a few minutes Laura couldn’t find her way out she crying so much that her tears looked like wet wet rain drops.

She thought “ I should stop being a baby and find my way home, ” Laura was so pumped to find her Mum that she will literally stay in other people’s houses if she has to. She started to hike to her house she got poked by a pokey plant, she was so sor but she didn’t give up till she ended her search. She was making progress and she found one of her family’s house it was her Nana “ Hi Nana, how are you Nana ” Her Nana asked

“ What are you doing far from home Laura. ” Laura explained everything to her Nana and she helped Laura continue her search after Laura and her Nana have a sleep.

Today Laura will journey all the way to her Mum and Dad and reunite with them and my Nana will help me to get there. We climbed the mountain walked through the grass and finally made it back home. Laura said “ Mum, Dad I’m here, I’m here. ” Mum and Dad said

“ We were looking for you everywhere, but your home now that’s the more important thing and, oh hey Laura’s Nana. ” Laura’s Nana said

“ Hey haven’t seen you in ages but were together now and if Laura didn’t come to my house she wouldn’t of be able to come back home to you guys. Laura doesn't want to go to the shops alone ever again.

The end.

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High Diving Giraffes

One beautiful marvelous day we went into a building that has a nice blue swimming pool near the zoo we live in. My name is Giraffey and I like adventures. We thought if we sneak out when no one was around we can run to the pool. Surprisingly that plan worked and we got to the pool without anyone knowing, now it’s time to get ready to swim.

After we got ready we walked down the long beautiful blue hall on our way to the pool. I saw something and I made funny faces in it, I think it’s a camera but I didn’t actually know what it is but it does look cool. It felt like an eternity to get to the super refreshing pool that we can relax in. It takes even longer with your whole family of giraffes!

Finally we got to the deep blue fun pool, and one giraffe in my family went to hang above the pool to swing us. We patiently waited for our turn but I was raging with excitement that I couldn’t wait one bit so I ran to the front. When I first got in the pool I was so excited to be the first one, but then I felt bad that the other giraffe didn’t get her first go. We each got a go then another then another till we were sleepy

Then we all went back home and went to bed. I thought “that was the best experience in my life, I want to do this again.” After a few minutes I fell fast asleep “zzzzzzzzz.”

ADRIFT

One beautiful day the sun was shining like shiny emeralds and the clouds were soft like a teddy bear. All the flying animals were flying like they usually do. Hi my name Lilly and I’m 11 years old, at school my nickname is ruby because I am in a friend group, we call each other nicknames all the time.

Today is Saturday and I’m just looking out my window,  looking at the beautiful view from my window. I wish I could ride on the giant whale by myself with nobody on with me. I know my house is on a flying giant whale, but I want to ride one by myself.

A quick bird came past, obviously I followed her to see where the bird was going, it went around my house a few times then I lost the bird, I thought it would lead to somewhere cool or a new place I guess not. I was devastated  because what if the bird took me to a giant flying whale without a house on it or even it would fly me to a whale.with nothing on it.

Wait, what it looked like another bird was coming straight towards me. BANG it wasn’t a bird it’s a human with bird wings on. I got closer and closer then I helped the person up, it was a lady. It got really windy I held myself down so I wouldn’t fly away. The lady put her flying goggles on and flew away I tried to catch her but I was to slow. I was so sad I walked away back into my house.

What was that sound “was that one of the birds, it can’t be.”  It was the lady again she threw a robe over and before she told me  “ if a string comes, grave it” I guess that was the rope that she wa talking about, so I graved it and tied it around the tree. Then the lady smiled at me I think we were going on an adventure. “Yay,” but I didn’t know it was 10 years of adventuring.

10 years later

After 10 years of going adventuring I finally got home not my sky home my parents home, I haven’t seen them in years. Last time I saw them was before a bird picked me up and took me to the house on the whale. That was years ago. I asked “ can I live with you again mum and dad please and they said “if you want to.”

Buster the Boxer

Buster the boxer

Hi my name is Buster and it’s Christmas eve, I was watching my owner Julia jumping up and down on her bed that has flowers and bees on it. I was in her room because it was frozen like ice outside. She really wants a trampoline for christmas, she has been asking her mum and dad to get a trampoline for months. Then her mum came in and tucked Julia, into her bed.

Then her mum looked out the window. It looked really strange so I ran down stairs and looked out the giant window. “It was a trampoline for Julia, she is going to be really happy when her mum and dad shows her.” I hope she lets me jump with her on it with her.

Wait what was that was that a free rosish fox and his sister on the trampoline. What if they break it, poo on the it or even rip it. Then a skunk went on the trampoline “why are these animals on the trampoline, do they know It’s new. Why aren’t they on older trampolines not a brand new one.” The squirrels went on the tramp as well. Now I want to go on the trampoline with the other animals but Julia's mum and dad said “It’s too cold,” so I had to stay inside. I wish it wasn’t winter so we could go on it. Then I fell asleep without noticing

The next day Julia got to see the trampoline for the first time. I was really excited to jump on it with her. Julia ran out of her room, got dressed and ran outside. Her dad showed her the trampoline and she was so shocked, she has been waiting for this for so long. I also was so excited that I ran across the snow and went on the tramp. I was so happy that I finally got to go on the trampoline. Julia and I jumped on the tramp, then we had Christmas lunch and opened the rest of our present. We had the best Christmas ever.

Somalia writing

Somalia

One beautiful sunny day at sea I was watching the sunrise as I was drinking my tea. My name is Tim and I am the captain that steers the ship and shows the way. All the crew have known each other since high school so we are good friends. We were helping the builders with taking parts for a new house, that we can live in. We had to go across Somalia ocean, it took 6 weeks to get there.

Wait what was that in the distance it looked like it was creeping closer. “Ahh” we all screamed Pirates were robbing us, everyone else was screaming except me because I couldn’t hear it. Then the lead pirate came up to me and gave me a big fright and said “give me the key,” then he yelled again “give me the key!” I gave him the key because I didn’t want him to kill me. I got my walky talky at the back of the ship and told the robots to “get out of there box and hide somewhere else till I say go.”

The pirates were looking for the robots so they can tell them what to do and be in control of the whole ship. They looked in the box and I said “go” and the robots came out and BAM the robots were fighting the pirates.

Then the lead pirate was steering the ship then the robot touched him on the shoulder and he scared him so much that he turned around and looked at the rest of the pirate crew, there hands up and the lead pirate said “fine we’ll go.”

The robots said “this is yours, captain.” I gave them a smile and went to steer the boat or else we'll go the wrong way.

The End

Adventures are the pits

One day I was at my friend's birthday party at an indoor playground, she was turning 8 years old my friend dared me to go down the slide into the ball pit with the room as silent as mice. I was so terrified because “what if it goes to dinosaurs, cavemen or evan zombies.” I was so worried my wrist were shaking, I held my breath, counted to five and screamed all the way down.

I was right it did take me to a different world but it was a ball world. I kept falling, falling and falling like I was in a never ending hole, till I face planted onto some balls. I touched my face and a lollipop was there, it was so gross I could throw up. I saw the top of the ball pit, I walked backwards a bit to see it better but then I nearly fell down to the black part of the pit, I saved myself by taking a step forwards “few that was close.” I was so relieved that I survived nearly falling.

Then I started to climb to the tippy top, I had to jump for it, I made it. Then I lost my grip on one hand and hanged on with the other, I thought I was going to die. A plaster came down onto my face and I had to get it off with 2 hands, wait I need to hold onto something “ahh!!,” wait I didn't fall I had to be holding onto something it was a lollipop stick. I was terrified to take it out of the balls and back on. I didn’t fall “now I can get to the top of the ball pit no time.” I climbed and climbed then, I made it all the way up.

I am so glad, relieved and excited I made it up to the top of the unusual ball pit. Well my friends didn’t think I could get out huh. I looked at the lollipop and there were only 2 tiny dirt stains so I ate it anyways. My friends were shocked that I got out.

The End.

Beyond the lines

We were going on a boat for 2-3 months to go to… It was the first battle of world war 1, and the muddy muck looked disgusting. We were sprinting towards the the Turkish soldiers with our troops. The reason we came here is our grandpa told us all about war, we thought it sounded cool and terrifying. He also told us dad was going to war this year.

My brother accidentally fell over when we were running towards our dad and heaps of shooting noises scared me, I looked behind me and I saw heaps of soldiers getting killed. I helped my brother to get back on his feet and we started running again. A bomb nearly killed us but we did fall over.

Then we found a place to hide and to avoid getting shot. I was taking care of my little brother through the whole battle, or the whole war he will be by my side at all times. We had finally found our dad after all this searching and nearly dying.

When we got to him a bomb went off where we were before, the person that was there when it went off got killed. We saw heaps and heaps of people dying. Dad said “I need to help the other soldiers kids.”

Brother I think that day might be dead, if he isn’t I don’t know where he to find him where will we start looking?.

The end.

My Learning Goals 2017

Last week I had my parent teacher interviews. I had to show my Mum and Dad my learning goals for this year. I'm going to show you my learning goals on my blog post.

To achieve these goals I have to work really hard and try my best.

Here they are:

My ruin 2017

Ruin

It was a bright beautiful day and I was in an abandoned city called heaven nano-system. It was like a jungle that was 100 years old.

After that I pushed a metal box onto the ground , it was a long long way down. It was 247 feet high, it didn’t break at all. Then I went down and I was safe because I was not any human, anyways. I kicked open the metal box, I looked inside. I found the box I was searching around for 123 years

I heard something was it the helicopter I was running away from or the wind, it got louder and louder then...It was the helicopter I was running away from it was the killing robot helicopter, it was trying to kill me. Because I stole gold from the helicopter. 2 years ago it was still trying to get me.

Then I found a motorbike lucky it was my favorite colour leather black I was like

“Yeah my favorite colour,” I thought I was so lucky it was black, I was still running away even though it was my favorite colour. I was glad it was new as well so it would go fast like thunder. I hopped on the motorbike and rode away. I was faster than thunder but the same speed as lightning.

The little robots came out and tried to help the big robot kill me. I went into the dark scary  tunnel to get away from the little robots. I thought I got away, but I was wrong they had headlights on them so they could follow me in the dark or in the light.

I got metal sticks of my motorbike that I don’t need and made them go on fire, to shoot at the little robots. I kept doing that till I ran out

“ what can I do,” I said. Then..

Then I found one more stick but, the big robot was right in front of me I thought I could go up the ramp that’s right in front of me then jump to the helicopter and stab it in the back.

“Yep that’s a good idea” I said so I did just that, I didn’t expect it to make a BANG.

My mission is complete I defeated the robot helicopter. Now in a few weeks, months or years will come another mission for me. Bye for right now...It was a bright beautiful day and I was in an abandoned city called heaven nanosystem. It was like a jungle that was 100 years old.

After that I pushed a metal box onto the ground , it was a long long way down. It was 247 feet high, it didn’t break at all. Then I went down and I was safe because I was not any human, anyways. I kicked open the metal box, I looked inside. I found the box I was searching around for 123 years

I heard something was it the helicopter I was running away from or the wind, it got louder and louder then...It was the helicopter I was running away from it was the killing robot helicopter, it was trying to kill me. Because I stole gold from the helicopter. 2 years ago it was still trying to get me.

Then I found a motorbike lucky it was my favorite colour leather black I was like

“Yeah my favorite colour,” I thought I was so lucky it was black, I was still running away even though it was my favorite colour. I was glad it was new as well so it would go fast like thunder. I hopped on the motorbike and rode away. I was faster than thunder but the same speed as lightning.

The little robots came out and tried to help the big robot kill me. I went into the dark scary  tunnel to get away from the little robots. I thought I got away, but I was wrong they had headlights on them so they could follow me in the dark or in the light.

I got metal sticks of my motorbike that I don’t need and made them go on fire, to shoot at the little robots. I kept doing that till I ran out

“ what can I do,” I said. Then..

Then I found one more stick but, the big robot was right in front of me I thought I could go up the ramp that’s right in front of me then jump to the helicopter and stab it in the back.

“Yep that’s a good idea” I said so I did just that, I didn’t expect it to make a BANG.

My mission is complete I defeated the robot helicopter. Now in a few weeks, months or years will come another mission for me. Bye for right now...