My cinquain poem slide

Hi guys I'm back with another post to show you guys. This one is my acquaint poem I made today.

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All about me

W.A.L.T: Know more about each other.

This is just an all about me that I just wanted you guys to see.

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My summing recount

W.A.L.T: write a good recount and look at the structure of a recount.

Here's my recount about swimming:

Swimming

On Wednesday the 25th of October 2017 in the afternoon, room 10 and 6 went swimming at the Canterbury swim school. I’m in room 10 so I went with room 6. First we got changed and you don’t want to know here about that so let’s go on. Then my class eated there morning tea and I had most of my lunch, so I won’t have much for lunch today.

Then when the first bell rang we went to play. I went to the other side of the school but then I remembered when the next bell rang I needed to get my swim bag and line up, so I just went back. The bell rang and I went back.

Then we went to meet up with room six on the way to bus get on the bus. We went out of the school gates and waited for about five minutes till we got on the bus.

When we got on the bus we all found a seat and I was facing right towards my bestfriends.

We got off the bus to go in and take our shoes off and get into our togs. We were all finished getting undressed into our togs and we walked into the actual thing were the pools were. I was in the big cold pool, but there are smaller warmer pools that I was in last year.

Anyways we all got our caps and goggles on and went to our groups. When I got in the pool it was cold but after swimming a little bit it got warmer. The first thing we did was as much as we can of freestyle. Then we did the same but backstroke, did the same for the worm as well. But only freestyle we had to do at least 8 lengths

After we finished our lesson the girl went in the girl changing room and the boys went in the boys changing rooms. When I got in the changing rooms I was getting dressed and talking at the same time.

After we got changed we put our shoes on and sat in our lines to go back on the bus, to go to school.

When we got back to school it was play time then we carried on with a normal school day.

I like swimming very much at the swim school.

Facts about the sun

W.A.L.T:  I am learning to read and find the appropriate information I am looking for

This is my DLO about facts about the sun / or how the sun helps us.

Here's my DLO:




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My Kakapo poster

W.A.L.T: Predicting

I am learning to make and check predictions  (smart guesses) before, during and after reading.

Summarising

I am learning to summarise and retell  the main ideas and important information from what I have read in my own words.

Evaluating

I am learning to think carefully about what I am reading and how I use the text.

This is my reading poster, we had to finish this by the day I’m posting this. But I finished it a day before I was meant to. Basically this is just heaps of facts to teach people about the Kakapo.

My Lily and the snowman writing

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of the snowman

WALT use adjectives, adverb and other interesting language features to describe the setting, the snowman's feelings and thoughts and what is happening.

This is just my writing for this week, if you didn’t read my W.A.L.T I’m basically learning to describe and my teacher calls it show not tell. Show not tell means like just paint a picture in the reader's head

This is my writing:

Lily and the snowman

One glowey winter night the moon was shining like sun on a window in the summer. I really love to make snowmen in the winter in my giant backyard. I love to feel the snow on my hands and feet, I also love see how deep the snow is and fall in sometimes. I haven’t told anyone but I want to eat the snow. I love the snow so much I asked my mum “ can I go out to play in the snow for 20 minutes” from my warm cozy bed and mum said “yes, but you need to come in when I tell you and bundle up” from the warm fire place. I said “ok, I will.” I got ready and went outside.

Oh hi my name is Lily and I’m 6 years old I went outside and the snow was better than I imagined. It looked like candy floss and I just want to eat it right now, but I know I can’t. After three minutes I started to make snowballs and I had an idea. I should make a snowman so that’s what I did. I got all the materials, a carrot, a scarf, stones for button and face, the last thing is a hat.

I started to make the snowballs bigger and bigger till I made two pretty big snowballs, I added all the materials except the carrot. So I added the carrot and I jumped down, then something magical happened the snowman came to life. I was so shocked and excited I had my own snowman, he said “ hi I’m your magical snowman.” In my head I was screaming but all I said  was “ this is awesome I have my own talking snowman. The snowman said “just call me bill.” So I said “ok hi bill.”

I said “ what can you do bill,” he didn’t say anything he showed me what he could do. He put on a puppet show and I love puppet shows nearly as much as I love the snow. I was so thrilled. Bill said “ use your imagination and that’s what I did. The first one was a bird, I imagined it flying over big rocks and a knight riding a horse. The horse was jumping rock to rock and it was really cool. I loved it so much I screamed with happiness.

A few days later he did another one and it was an umbrella, I imagined it that my dad was on and island and my mum found him. Then hugged him under the moonlight, that one was really cool as well. But then spring was starting to come and bill was melting, but I had an idea of putting him in the garage freezer. I asked him if that would be ok and he said “ that’s the best idea I’ve heard ever.” I told him I would get him out every winter and play with him.  The last thing bill asked was “ can I have a teddy bear” so I gave him a teddy bear.

A year later it was snowing again and I could bill out and play with him. He didn’t look different at all but he said “ Lily you got taller and you look more michore. I said “ thank you bill, are you ready to have some fun. He said “ of course I’m ready” so we went to the backyard and we watched the show together again and again. Until spring came and he had to go back in the freezer. We were both really sad but we knew we needed to put bill in the freezer until next winter.

But next winter I was a teenager and I forgot about Bill, but I did got say hi and stuff. But I was on my phone most of the time and I didn’t ask him how his day was or anything, that was rude of me. Inside I did want to take Bill out but I was just too busy with my friends and doing teenager stuff. One time I was grabbing an ice block out of the freezer and he looked really sad, but once again I was on my phone talking to my friends.

Years have past and now I’m an adult, I work and I have a child, but I still live in the same house. I had to stay late for work because that day I was about ten minutes late to work. When I was leaving everything went wrong, my cup fall over, my light fall over and my snow globe moved on my desk. It showed a picture of a snowman… Bill I just remembered he’s in the freezer in the garage, I keep forgetting to take him out every winter. I need to go home and get him out of the freezer. So I rushed home and went to the garage and got everything away from the freezer, then opened it.

Bill looked so thrilled and I said “ I’m sorry for forgetting to take you out, I don’t know what I was thinking” he said, “ I forgive you Lilly you were just growing up.” I was so glad bill understood me and I asked him. “Do you want to put on a show for my daughter.” He said “ of course I am.” So I told my daughter and she was so thrilled she got ready right away.

This was so memorable my daughter could keep Bill then give it to her children, the whole family can have a go at keeping Bill. But for now Bill is mine and I can ask Bill to put on a show for my kids and my family. Because my kids love puppet shows as well, and I still loves Bill’s shows and I will take him out every winter. This time I will never miss a winter ever again.

The end.

20 things we should say more often

This is just 20 things I think people should say more often and if you don't wanna say these things you don't have to.

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