I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Danielle I like your learning goal's because it's really cool and I can see you are getting better at it. I hope you get better on your learning goal and achieving them. What do you want to get better at?
Hi Danielle my name is Lilly from Templeton Primary School. I really liked your goals.Maybe you could change the goal that says use a different voice inbetween speechmarks,because you have completed that goal.I would really like to see what you do next.
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I love your goals danielle
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ReplyDeleteHi Danielle I like your learning goal's because it's really cool and I can see you are getting better at it. I hope you get better on your learning goal and achieving them. What do you want to get better at?
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ReplyDeleteHi Danielle my name is Lilly from Templeton Primary School. I really liked your goals.Maybe you could change the goal that says use a different voice inbetween speechmarks,because you have completed that goal.I would really like to see what you do next.
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